Wednesday 13 May 2015

Magazine Ad: Draft 1

We think this magazine ad would work better in Cosmopolitan due to the bright colours, this image integrates many of our texts which provides a theme and consistancy

We think this would work for the target of cosmopolitan although it is bright many people seemed to like the brightness



2 comments:

  1. 8. Fine as is. See work Ben has done adding all their rough cuts (use his links list), with text to clearly explain changes: http://shadowpiccs.blogspot.co.uk/

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  2. 9. In conclusion, some of these need minor tweaks, but the bigger issues are: lack of even basic explanation of sequencing (so there's no clear overall sense of a campaign), audience/s and magazine/s, changes between drafts, description/analysis of semiotic strategies. Potentially a simply superb overall campaign with this sorted - much of the text I refer to will feed straight into Evals and firm up R+P marks, which should help!

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